Message to a Boy pt III

by junet   Nov 25, 2009


For every minute, I think of you,
of things that you might do.
Where will you maybe at this time?
Or are you having some wine?

Are you thinking of me?
But I guess you don't want to see.
Face become wet by my own tears.
I know this will be the start of my fears.

Life is saddening day by day.
Trying to come to you in any way.
Push my luck, but never win.
The closer to you, the life's so mean.

I try to give everything I have.
But you just ignored, that makes me sad.
When will you realize that I am just here?
Alone, waiting for you to save me from tears.

I'm still holding on for second chance.
Hoping that you would touch my hand.
Your sorry will erase all the pains,
Because the love still remain...
-November 26, 2009

"i'm still holding on, i just don't know how long i can survive. hope you can read it so you would know what i want to say"

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  • 14 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    You know why this poem is so appealing to me? Because I'm going through the same thing. I just lost someone who I didn't even have a chance to have a relationship with. This person told me how they felt of me and it was frightening enough to the point the person just up and left me. You've expressed your pain farther than I could ever hope to.

  • 14 years ago

    by Samuel Dimafelix

    I know that this poem is totally came from your heart every words is hunting me and take me to your sadness.. the powerful depression visit to my side and the tears came and run down to my eyes... somewhere i can relate to the poem and you totally make me feel alone and sad...

    great job friend
    great piece
    -sam