by BitterXSweetness Nov 25, 2009
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
My head is clouded |
This is kind of twisted and unique in a good way. The girl didn't want the guy getting the best of him but in the end thats exactly what happend. The second stanza was really good I thought especially the line "for misery loves company" so true. I think there were a couple spelling mistakes but nothing serious. Nice job 5/5 |