Hope Will Forever Live On.

This is the kind of poem that someone saves and reads everyday. at least that's what id do, lol.

"Faith keeps me alive"
that is veryy true, not a lot of people realize that faith is what has us still living.

very inspiring, beautiful write.

//Platelets clot pessimism,
as optimism breaks through
the permeable membrane
concealing my heart,
feelings revealed from within.//

very beautifully penned... the mention is platelets and membrane displays the emotions flowing inside even more effectively... very powerful lines :)

//Protective and supportive
fibers constructed of love...
embrace me.//

another set of brilliant lines...

awesome write :)

The second verse is especially fine. Well done!

I loved reading this,... and the feeling it gave Just awesome Temps! You are very talented. This is a winner, that is getting my vote..! :) Lol.

I really enjoyed my read. I like the optistmis spin you used at the end. Very well done, 5/5, kel.