Wow, amazing poem!! I really liked this it flows fast which works for me, and it's got a twist as it starts with no hope then the stranger seems like hope then the ending is back to no hope , I liked that. and very cleverly done with the opening and ending stanzas the same. one of my favourite styles of poems and I loved it. thanks xxx

Wow, amazing poem!! I really liked this it flows fast which works for me, and it's got a twist as it starts with no hope then the stranger seems like hope then the ending is back to no hope , I liked that. and very cleverly done with the opening and ending stanzas the same. one of my favourite styles of poems and I loved it. thanks xxx

A wonderful poem though some very sad words you have woven together. I liked where you went with this, I enjoyed reading what you had to say.

God bless you and Merry Christmas!

~MaryAnne