I just favorated you after reading this poem. i love your flow. it all makes sense. i love it. keep writing!!!

Those brown eyes that pierce my heart
Causing it once again to beat so hard
That passion that runs through my veins
Consuming every inch of what you would call sane

love it!!

Wow great job!! it is really good your flow was nearly impeccable and the softness in your words really emphasized the emotions behind them your an AMAZING writer