Why Hide Indeed!

by Cherimari2   Nov 29, 2009


Why hide...
Indeed!
If there's a reason to.
Simply spoken...
The place is warm,
That keeps me cozy.
I've made it clean
And for myself.
No nasties hiding there.
No syllables spoken
Without a care.
It shines on it's own.
This place...
That I am known to frequent.
Where shadows smile
Their appeal.
There are no thieves
Stealing...
Happiness at whim.
And there's no fee to get in.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Cindy

    Cheri
    Sounds like a awesome place to go when you feel life weighing you down :)
    Good job!
    ~hugs~
    Cindy

  • 15 years ago

    by Cherimari2

    Thank you Rainbow...Courageous...Andrea and Sylvia!

    The fact is...this place is almost tangent. I call it Lalaland. There there are moof-flowers...and I think I have a poem describing it.

    But really it is a whimsy. Smiles.
    Mari

  • 15 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    This was a interesting write definatly, like Sylvia said it makes you wonder where this place really is. A bit of suspense & wonder at the end...loved that.

  • 15 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Sounds like a good place to have to retreat when things get overwhelming. Leaves the reader to decide where that place is. Well done.

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