Sounds like a good place to have to retreat when things get overwhelming. Leaves the reader to decide where that place is. Well done.

This was a interesting write definatly, like Sylvia said it makes you wonder where this place really is. A bit of suspense & wonder at the end...loved that.

Thank you Rainbow...Courageous...Andrea and Sylvia!

The fact is...this place is almost tangent. I call it Lalaland. There there are moof-flowers...and I think I have a poem describing it.

But really it is a whimsy. Smiles.
Mari

Cheri
Sounds like a awesome place to go when you feel life weighing you down :)
Good job!
~hugs~
Cindy