by WakingFreedom Nov 30, 2009
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
I asked my *Maurluq if it was possible to travel the Rainbow, |
I thought it was a really great poem, and i agree its almost like speaking of skittles, i thought it was amazing imagery and the total idea of the work was great. Nice work, 5/5 |
For a second i felt like i was in a land of skittles lol. wise words from grandma. well done. 5/5 who cares what you misspelled, what matters is i understood you. thats poetry. you have an amazing imagination |
by Jessie
That is really good, I love how it tells a story while leading all off the first line. |
The imagery and flow takes me there in my mind |