by DarkCrystalbtrfy Nov 30, 2009
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Cross my heart and hope to die |
by KJ
Hmmm, pretty good write. Although the rhyming was on point, I think you could have done a little better with the flow. But other than that, it was a wonderful read. So I think you also desrve a 5/5. Keep up the good writes |
by Hollymariee
Good rhyming , although the flow is off in a few spots . You also use really good imagery . Very well written . |