by Baby Rainbow
That's really good, I can relate to it because I've just been let down by someone I lobed and done everything for and when I hurt they just hurt me more so I can relate to this and think you have described the feelings well. only suggestion is 3rd stanza 3rd line says amagine instead of imagine. xxx |
by Lulu
Sam you amaze me more and more each time with your poetry, its amazing! |