Never

by The Lady of Shalott   Dec 1, 2009


Never say forever
because forever's never last
They may be here right now
but soon he'll blend into your past

Never leave the one you love
for the one you don't
because you think they'll still be there when you return
I'm telling you they won't

Never try to hide it all
when you want people to think your strong
It takes real strength to show
you've been hurting all along

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  • 14 years ago

    by Sora

    Absolutely touching. I really liked this one! Short and sweet, yet deep at the same time. A good poem from the heart, my favorite to read.

    Never try to hide it all
    when you want people to think your strong
    It takes real strength to show
    you've been hurting all along

    That was a wonderful ending to a good poem. Especially the last two lines. You've written something that many can relate too, including me. Job well done, 5/5

    -Ashlei

  • 14 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    Even through the words are good this seem
    more like a big quote. like you were preaching, it would be a lot better if it was more personal.like write what happen to you instead of just giving a warning do you know
    what I mean??

  • 14 years ago

    by VeinsofHate

    I love it. I just was wanting it to go on because its that good. You a great writer

  • 14 years ago

    by Second to None

    Wow, i really liked this alot! its been a while sence i've read a sad poem that flowed right. nice choice of words. 5/5

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