Wow, i really liked this alot! its been a while sence i've read a sad poem that flowed right. nice choice of words. 5/5

I love it. I just was wanting it to go on because its that good. You a great writer

Even through the words are good this seem
more like a big quote. like you were preaching, it would be a lot better if it was more personal.like write what happen to you instead of just giving a warning do you know
what I mean??

Absolutely touching. I really liked this one! Short and sweet, yet deep at the same time. A good poem from the heart, my favorite to read.

Never try to hide it all
when you want people to think your strong
It takes real strength to show
you've been hurting all along

That was a wonderful ending to a good poem. Especially the last two lines. You've written something that many can relate too, including me. Job well done, 5/5

-Ashlei