It is a shame that a cure has not been found for this disease and that society attaches such a stigma to it. Well done.

Raj
Welcome back dear! This piece is so sad and holds so much truth.

Deserted soul and body frail,
words stabbing her heart,
reverberates a silent wail.

No one deserves to die alone and in pain. It very sad that so many of us still have the fear of being close to someone afflicted with this. Thank God for the supporters who work so hard to raise money for AIDS awareness. And the places that have opened to take care of the babies and small children who have been born with this cruel disease. So they may still feel loved and cared for.
Excellent job!
Love Cindy

I can't say more then what has been said. Your poem sounded loudly in the readers ear. A devastating condition, unstable and terrifying
Well done Raj

Wonderful writing her LR. Intelligent, touching and fine craftsmanship and

This is definatly a sad write about a topic which indeed does seem like a crime, It's truly a devestating disease and affects way too many people in this world. Nicely done...