Desperate Attempt

by Poetic Tragedy08   Dec 1, 2009


I've lost these hours of sleep
With you running through my dreams
I've lost my own control
With your eyes in my head

I can't discover this treasure
Even though it's right here
I've seen the map, I've seen the X
But I can't take the first step

*I've been searching the pixels of my mind
Looking for that once in a life time
My quest fell on your beautiful eyes
Now I'm scared of these failed tries

I felt the death of my own doubt
Lost all the feeling inside your fire
I can't find where my fingers are staggering
I think I lost the night you called

So take one strong look

*I've been searching the pixels of my mind
Looking for that once in a life time
My quest fell on your beautiful eyes
Now I'm scared of these failed tries

So I'll try this one last desperate attempt
To help you see
Just how much
You mean to me...

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  • 12 years ago

    by Jenna Bella Oldridge

    I loved the title and I loved the poem. This seemed very lyrical to me and I loved how put the whole thing together

    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Another of those very original lyrics with romantic imagery