I gave up.

by El   Dec 1, 2009


So what's the point?
If its always going to be this hard,
If this pain wont ever fade,
If I'm trying to fight off the darkness
But I can never see light,
Just tell me what the point is?

I want to escape.
The confusion....
the emptiness...
the dull ache in my heart,
It doesn't ever ease up.
I just want to escape

I'm too weak
Strong people would of held on,
Got help.
Got better.
I didn't fight, I gave up
I was just too weak.

I have to leave this life
Because after all the colours have faded
And the people have gone,
Whats left but darkness?
It wont ever get better
I just have to leave.

(I don't really write poems like this, i prefer rhyming ones because i feel like i write them better but if you have any constructive criticisms or opinions or suggestions, even if for a better name, let me know :) )

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