Night of Your Life [Part I]

Ok i like its its really sweet and the end take a walk with me was my favorite its adorable!!!

Very very cool. this must have been a fun poem for you to write. I favorite part in this is,

It's hard to believe that no one's jumped at the chance To treat you like a Queen; show you romance

Im on to read part two of it.

also... I noticed you miss spelled drowning in the last stanza. You'll want to fix that.

"But not to worry because I've got a plan
To save you from drowing and pull you to land
Take a walk with me... "

These lines were the most touching. They struck me the most and I love the 30 minute passing part. Gives a feeling of suspense and subtlety. This poem overall was great.

I find this poem very exciting with very romantic imagery. I also sense a personal touch

very contemperary

Excellent poem...i have no words to explain... I gives you 5 on 5 (5/5) because there is on way to give more points to a poem.

Keep up the good work