Congrats on the win.

This is a beautifully written poem that actually touched my very soul with the sorrow lingering behind every line that seem to open a hole into anyone's heart.

5/5

-Heather

Excellent poem, so well written I can't point out a favorite line. This piece is uniquely written and fill with heartfelt emotions.

A great peice, truly. I loved how you wrote from both perspectives. it gave the poem a definite uniqueness. Great write :)

WOW! The imagery is just stunning. You both painted the picture beautifully. The idea was well thought though quite sad. Well done to the both of you and congrats on the win. Its well deserved.

Alisha

WOW! The imagery is just stunning. You both painted the picture beautifully. The idea was well thought though quite sad. Well done to the both of you and congrats on the win. Its well deserved.

Alisha

Sorry for over posting didnt realise it had worked the first time. Congrats again!