Blessed.

"As inspiration dances on fingertips
tingling inner desires are released..."

This sparked "magic" in my thoughts and obviously displayed your poetic and imaginative side of writing.

"spiraling passion tangles with
rose butterflies, as emotion
permeates the truth-"

The meaning here is outstanding and the very wording of "rose butterflies" made my heart smile!

"parading through words
of promise from deep
within a loving soul."

Good use of "parading" it gave off the right effect.

"Devotion and faith permanent
to never diminish along with the
love I share with you."

I did not like the way you put "permanent to never...." it did not seem to read well to me, either place a comma after "faith", which would sound better to me or something else. I wasn't quite sure what you meant, if you just left off wording or what.

"Blessed eternally to have
your beautiful soul to love."

I could see this being an inscription from your heart, these two lines are your voice also speaking of your true feelings and blessings.

Beautiful work...

~MaryAnne

Temps
What a beautiful piece.

Blessed eternally to have
your beautiful soul to love.

Sometimes we get lucky to get blessed with a beautiful soul ome that will hopefully last from now to eternity.
Excellent!
Love Cindy

To have the love of a wonderful person does make you truly blessed. Well done.