Boldly original

The deep line which I pondered the most was Feeding the lions with graves

This situation is such a tough one to be in. Pretty Ironic because I'm in this situation myself right now...

"Boldy Original"....no better words can describe this poem. I thought it was very original and I absolutely loved it! Your way of expressing your feelings is very unique which is hard to find anymore. I thought this was a great write!

Forget about the boy in the corner
With his knees to his head
Don't think about how he feels
Just leave him for dead
- this stanza has a really awkward flow ..

Other wise it flows nicely , and your imagery is very different but is effective . Well done , 5/5

I liked this poem a lot. Its very raw and I can see how hard it must have been to pen such a piece.

"He read your message in a bottle
Figured everything on his own
He didn't really realize
How cold it is alone"

^ The stanza that spoke to me the most

5/5