Try's = tries

You need to format your poetry differently , because it's just so hard to read . You should allow all your ideas in one verse, like a rhyme at the end of each or something . Again , good flow but it takes alot of effort to get into it . I'll give you 5/5 ..

Hmm you say shameless then ashamed? I like how it has a double meaning first how she is the prey stalked, sounds like maby a murder is comming for her, then it could also mean she is being bullied? then as well in the last stanza it says his so it culd be a boy breaking her heart. very good.
My favorite lines were:

Why does
she get to be the prey stalked
by them everyday?Her heart
is racing,her head is pacing.

5/5

Very well written
I can picture the girl in my mind as how i would see her
almost that black and white image that makes the sadness set in

i feel her giving up
this poem hits very close to home
i saw one thing though

"Every lie they have every told"

i believe every should be ever

just thought i'd let you know

good poem 5/5!

<3
-MoonLight-