Dear misery

by XxXcrystalXcontagiousXxX   Dec 5, 2009


Dear misery,Please
let go of me,Suffer
slowly.Is this the
way its meant to be?

Close the curtain,Cut the
lights. Through
the struggle through
the fights.Ill keep
on going through the
night.

Dear misery,
Pick my self from the
dirt ill push on through
the hurt.Dear misery
the sky gets darker.

Why does it
get harder and harder?
I grow an inch you cut
me down.In my tears
i start to drown.

Dear misery,I feel your
breath upon my neck.
My hands start to
tremble.Through the
agony through the
pain.Why the torment
in my brain?

Dear misery let god
carry me to the light.
Just let go
of me you've already
won this fight.

I'm cold and blue you,
Left here to die just
let death suck me dry.

Dear misery,Into the
angels arms i will go.
With one last breath
this misery i will
no longer know,

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  • 14 years ago

    by SheenaMarie

    Very well written...you have talent for sure...great write 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Siro aKa Gaara

    Very nice poem, was a pleasure to read. Good flow, but was a tiny bit hard with sentance structure. But I got around that ^.^ The repitition of Dear Misery was great, overall well done :)

  • 14 years ago

    by XxMoonLightxX

    I thought this poem was very well written
    i could hear the words in my head flowing along as they were intended.
    talking to misery as if it were a person (something i've starting doing lately in my writing =) lol )

    I could feel the pain
    the slowly fading away feeling that was given

    A very strong poem indeed
    i like!

    5/5 =)

  • 14 years ago

    by DarkCrystalbtrfy

    Very nice, i loved the style, its free verse but yet in stanzas. Also I love how you put dear misery like your writing a letter. my favorite lines were:

    Suffer
    slowly
    &&
    Close the curtain,Cut the
    lights. Through
    the struggle through
    the fights.Ill keep
    on going through the
    night.

    The part aboutcut the curtain cut the lights. I love how harsh it sounds but at the same time so smooth. Bravo!!

    5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Hollymariee

    The content is amazing , but it's so hard to read ! You should devide it differently to allow easy reading . I have no other suggestions .. The flow is flawless and your rhymes are good too .

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