Very consistent well written stanzas deliver the dark emotion with a bit of light at the end of the tunnel. I love it.

The content is amazing , but it's so hard to read ! You should devide it differently to allow easy reading . I have no other suggestions .. The flow is flawless and your rhymes are good too .

Very nice, i loved the style, its free verse but yet in stanzas. Also I love how you put dear misery like your writing a letter. my favorite lines were:

Suffer
slowly
&&
Close the curtain,Cut the
lights. Through
the struggle through
the fights.Ill keep
on going through the
night.

The part aboutcut the curtain cut the lights. I love how harsh it sounds but at the same time so smooth. Bravo!!

5/5

I thought this poem was very well written
i could hear the words in my head flowing along as they were intended.
talking to misery as if it were a person (something i've starting doing lately in my writing =) lol )

I could feel the pain
the slowly fading away feeling that was given

A very strong poem indeed
i like!

5/5 =)

Very nice poem, was a pleasure to read. Good flow, but was a tiny bit hard with sentance structure. But I got around that ^.^ The repitition of Dear Misery was great, overall well done :)

Very well written...you have talent for sure...great write 5/5