Comments : Final Departure

  • 14 years ago

    by Hollymariee

    My love for yo uremains strong.
    That needs to be fixed .. This hit really close to home , because I've felt the exact same way and I think you portrayed it well ; although some rhymes felt kind of forced. The rhythm is okay , and I still think it deserves a 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Sumit Ojha

    Excellent! This poem touch my heart.., u r really nice poet... Keep up this good work(5/5)