Daisies and Butterflies (Quatern)

by Lu   Dec 6, 2009


Daisies and Butterflies

Smile of daisies and butterflies
mask his face of a thousand lies
sugar whispers melted in hand
fool's gold buried, beneath the sand

Greet each morning with hollow eyes
smile of daisies and butterflies
shielding her children from time's pain
creating sunshine out of rain

Heart weakens with every breath
her soul dying a painful death
smile of daisies and butterflies
anguish beneath golden disguise

As time passes, wounds slowly heal
her heart once more begins to feel
genuine love paints perfect skies
smile of daisies and butterflies

Quatern.
A Quatern is a sixteen line French form composed of four quatrains. It is similar to the Kyrielle and the Retourne. It has a refrain that is in a different place in each quatrain. The first line of stanza one is the second line of stanza two, third line of stanza three, and fourth line of stanza four. A quatern has eight syllables per line. It does not have to be iambic or follow a set rhyme scheme.

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  • 12 years ago

    by christopher

    Liked your style

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    I must of not seen this poem when it won, but I'm almost positive it's as equally deserving now as it was when it won. What a beautiful write, the repeating line was very effective & being repeated as the last line topped off the poem wonderfully. Makes the reader smile :] Awesome job, & congrats on your win .. I wish I would have noticed this sooner.

  • 14 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    A lovely and inspiring piece that is filled with hope near the end. Thank you for sharing this beauty with us. Congratulations on the well-deserved win!

    God bless you and Merry Christmas!

    ~MaryAnne

  • 14 years ago

    by Kuro

    Hmm another interesting technique. i didn't notice before. takes some skill to use one phrase 4 times to make a well done overal piece.
    nice job
    ~Ben

  • 14 years ago

    by Kuro

    Hmm another interesting technique. i didn't notice before. takes some skill to use one phrase 4 times to make a well done overal piece.
    nice job
    ~Ben