by Lu Dec 6, 2009
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Daisies and Butterflies |
by christopher
Liked your style |
I must of not seen this poem when it won, but I'm almost positive it's as equally deserving now as it was when it won. What a beautiful write, the repeating line was very effective & being repeated as the last line topped off the poem wonderfully. Makes the reader smile :] Awesome job, & congrats on your win .. I wish I would have noticed this sooner. |
A lovely and inspiring piece that is filled with hope near the end. Thank you for sharing this beauty with us. Congratulations on the well-deserved win! |
by Kuro
Hmm another interesting technique. i didn't notice before. takes some skill to use one phrase 4 times to make a well done overal piece. |
by Kuro
Hmm another interesting technique. i didn't notice before. takes some skill to use one phrase 4 times to make a well done overal piece. |