This is simply AMAZING! One of the best poems you've written Luu!
The repetitive line is wonderful and it did fit the poem just perfectly.
Your rhyme went sooo smooth and heart-embracing. I love it I love it I love it!

Well done beautiful.
Love you! <3

I like how the repitition of "smiles of daisies and butterflies" is used to cover up the more painful parts of the poem. (if i explained that right, lol)
very creative and brilliant. love it.

miss you and love you always!
Liz

I love it1
its so good and it must have been a lil tricky getting it to fit and ryme :]

Beautiful Luanne! Love the repetition...and the way the sadness turns to hope and happiness!

You did a nice job with this Luanne, i always find them difficult because of the repeating line, but yours fit nicely in there.

Beautiful piece again Luuu..I loved the dramatic effect of your words..Truly captivating that made me feel the pain written down within the poem..Im running out of votes sadly..

How the judges dint notice this? i dont know..lol:P

A lovely write to have read. A bitter love
which eventully found a truthful one. You did
really well with the form too! Excellent work :)

Great job on this form! Good imagery and it has the reader feeling different emotions throughout the piece.

Congrats on your double win, Luanne:)

Of the two poems I love this one best, it is so easy to relate to..how we can go up and down in love's carroussel..only the brave dare to step in again;)

God bless,

5/5 Ingrid

Omg, CONGRATS baaabbeeee!! <3 <3
very well deserved on both poems :)

Love you!

Hmm another interesting technique. i didn't notice before. takes some skill to use one phrase 4 times to make a well done overal piece.
nice job
~Ben

Hmm another interesting technique. i didn't notice before. takes some skill to use one phrase 4 times to make a well done overal piece.
nice job
~Ben

A lovely and inspiring piece that is filled with hope near the end. Thank you for sharing this beauty with us. Congratulations on the well-deserved win!

God bless you and Merry Christmas!

~MaryAnne

I must of not seen this poem when it won, but I'm almost positive it's as equally deserving now as it was when it won. What a beautiful write, the repeating line was very effective & being repeated as the last line topped off the poem wonderfully. Makes the reader smile :] Awesome job, & congrats on your win .. I wish I would have noticed this sooner.

Liked your style