Am I forgotten?
Did I drift away on a memory of yesterday?
Have you already forgotten when you said ,"Forever"?
Was I so unimportant to you that you can't remember things you said two hours ago?
Is your memory so weak that you don't recall your aclaimed "love" for me that you spoke of not so long ago?
Don't you remember staying up for hours with me on the phone?
Do you forget that we were best friends, not just in love?
Am I forgotten?
Or just not worth remembering?
Good piece...very emotional and romantic..
try to check 3rd line...forgotten--maybe it's work to put "forgot"
your aclaimed love--better to use "you claimed"
over all i like the message of your piece..i like the ending too
>Am I forgotten?
Or just not worth remembering?
like the way you write your ending...you seems doubtful bout your memories bout him..it's cool! keep up the good work and keep writing more=)