Good piece...very emotional and romantic..
try to check 3rd line...forgotten--maybe it's work to put "forgot"
your aclaimed love--better to use "you claimed"
over all i like the message of your piece..i like the ending too
>Am I forgotten?
Or just not worth remembering?
like the way you write your ending...you seems doubtful bout your memories bout him..it's cool! keep up the good work and keep writing more=)