Comments : Forgotten.

  • 12 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    Good piece...very emotional and romantic..
    try to check 3rd line...forgotten--maybe it's work to put "forgot"
    your aclaimed love--better to use "you claimed"
    over all i like the message of your piece..i like the ending too

    >Am I forgotten?
    Or just not worth remembering?

    like the way you write your ending...you seems doubtful bout your memories bout him..it's cool! keep up the good work and keep writing more=)