Very good job. Although I have a few suggestions:

"I feel like everythings just a game."
^^change everythings to everything's

"Wheres the fame?
Wheres the way?
I want to go away,
Take me to a better pain"
^^Wheres should be where's or where is"

"I hate this everyday,
Its always the same,
This is so plain."
^^everyday should be every day

I dont know if you meant to have those words written that way, I was just pointing them out. But other than those minor mistakes, I believe that this was an all around good poem. The emotion was great. 4/5

I, personally, liked your switch on rhyme scheme. It gives the poem a very nice flow and doesn't seem forced. Great job!

I like this. But it would be better if you change it a little bit like by putting"," or "." were they should be. that would help alot other then that grat job. 4/5 return the favor thx.

I liked the poem...It has a deep meaning to it if read deeply...:)I would love it if u read n comment my poems as well...:)