Comments : Dreaming

  • 14 years ago

    by Hollymariee

    This is a very powerful poem .. Your imagery is original and very straight forward . The message is definately delivered to the recipient , and if it was ever read I'm sure your feelings and emotions would be very clear . Very well done , 5/5 .

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Noooo girl dont you dare have these thoughts or write poems about this.You have us if you need someone to talk to.

  • 14 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    Woh.. hope youre okay Nik lol. A powerful poem, full of deep emotions. Love you..lolol.

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Nik, you're young yet and trust me things will be better and you won't have to keep dreaming to escape these thoughts. Troubles come and they go so hold on to the thought that you will be okay one day.