Very nice poem!!Very creative!!!

brandon hey i thought your poem was AMAZING. you did a very good job keep up the good work

Beautiful.

Wow. Both of your works are so amazing. Do you have more poems? I am adding you to my favourites list. I wish i could see more works of yours. I really loved everything in your poem. Its the typical kind which i like the best. Thanks a lot for sahring your work. Love, Trincy.

Such a beautiful poem.

Wow!! That was a BEAUTIFUL poem!! You've got lots of talent! Wow! Please, keep posting! Wow!
Amy

hey brandon that was an awsum poem,you are a very talented poet and very deep,not many boys/men are into poetry but you show a great love and compation for it

Great Poem. Keep it up. Your a wonderful poet.

Thank you all for your comments, it's greatly apprecaited.

WOW... id just lke to say i think your a spectacular poet, and i could only wish of being so great.my usualy poems have no particular rules to follow... but lately im trying to think about writting a kyrielle or a paradelle... but its really hard.. im so used to writting about boys and love and all that cliche mushy stuff.. i want to write about somthing more creative.. but i just dont know..do u have a few ideas to help me get started?i want to grow as a poet, but it seems im at the same place from when i last wrote.. your poems are so meaningful and have so much emotion attached to them... you are sooo good! i love this poem, as well as all your other ones ive read. especially the Kyrielle poems.. keep up the good work and please help me out with this! thankyou so much