by Lady Nik Dec 8, 2009
category :
Love, romance /
love is
Love like lace finds its way |
by Sylvia
Well done to both of you. The words and lines meshed together very well and makes for a seamless collab. It takes that someone special to give meaning to the word love and the emotions and feelings have been given a voice through your words. Well done. |
'perfectly normal compared the way' |
by KJ
Wow. Amazing collab! You had me with the first two lines. I love the flow of this poem. The voice was evident and the usage of the adjectives was perfect. Poems like this makes me smile without meaning to, ya know? Anyway, very good job you two. Overall 5/5 |