Wow. Amazing collab! You had me with the first two lines. I love the flow of this poem. The voice was evident and the usage of the adjectives was perfect. Poems like this makes me smile without meaning to, ya know? Anyway, very good job you two. Overall 5/5

Kay Jay

'perfectly normal compared the way'
^ you left out 'to' after compared.

A very beautiful poem by the both of you. Both of your styles of writing are noticeable to someone like me who reads both your poetry on a daily basis so I could tell who wrote what but despite that I thought this poem was just stunning and full of emotion and love. You both did wonderful...great job! (:

Well done to both of you. The words and lines meshed together very well and makes for a seamless collab. It takes that someone special to give meaning to the word love and the emotions and feelings have been given a voice through your words. Well done.