Stanza one was kind of disturbing but shows the frustration you undergo because of all youve been through. Although a little weird it really brought forth what you feel clearly and how irritating it is for you.

Interesting write... sounded more like a vent but a powerful one at that. The tone was wonderful and I felt like I could hear these voices talking. Well done.

This was full of anger, hatred and venom or so it read to me. It was as if the words hit me in the face as I read them. Well done.