Gosh did I love reading this. I think my favorite part was how you start each oart with a different word. I really enjoyed that. I alos like that you repeated "somewhere over the rainbow" that gave the poem a sense of hope. I entered this contest too but I can honestly say you did a brillant job here. You took an almost cliche saying and made it your own and that's hard to do. Beautiful work dear. :) Nik