Sunshine in the Autumn Rain

by Bhavin   Dec 10, 2009


Your presence in my life
At an unexpected hour
Makes me believe
In God's miracles and power.
Your sweet little smile
Drives away my pain
Like daffodils blooming in sunshine
In the autumn rain.

You wave your magic wand
When I expect the least
You change me into man
From a confused beast
All I can say is that
Your love makes me insane
Like darkness driven away by sunshine
In the autumn rain.

Your absence keeps me waiting
I feel like zillion years
Your presence in my life
Curbs down my threats and fears.
With your love around me
I have everything to gain.
With us in the umbrella and sunshine
In the autumn rain.

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  • 7 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    A nice little poem which has a happy
    rhythm to it and the rhymes have been chosen
    carefully to make this a pleasant read...nice write :)

    • 7 years ago

      by Bhavin

      Thank you so much, Meena ji. Your feedback is appreciated. More poems available on http://bhavinshah.in/igyp.html
      Do check them out when you get time. :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Amreen

    Lovely poem. Filled with great emotions and beautiful words:)

    Keep writing!

  • 14 years ago

    by kelleyana

    Beautifully written with emotions that shows how much you will protect this little love one. Thats the most essential thing in a child life "love'. I like the way you ended each stanza with "In the autumn rain." It blends well together and make your poem even more interesting. Very well done 5/5, kel.

  • 15 years ago

    by the pale queen of the silent night

    I love it...unbelievably well written..great word choice and like the rhyming..keep it up..

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