by Bhavin Dec 10, 2009
category :
Love, romance /
sensual love
Your presence in my life |
by Meena Krish
A nice little poem which has a happy |
by Bhavin
Thank you so much, Meena ji. Your feedback is appreciated. More poems available on http://bhavinshah.in/igyp.html |
by Amreen
Lovely poem. Filled with great emotions and beautiful words:) |
by kelleyana
Beautifully written with emotions that shows how much you will protect this little love one. Thats the most essential thing in a child life "love'. I like the way you ended each stanza with "In the autumn rain." It blends well together and make your poem even more interesting. Very well done 5/5, kel. |
I love it...unbelievably well written..great word choice and like the rhyming..keep it up.. |