The rhythm is excellent in this piece Jenn. Flowed so smoothly!

So much expressed with such little words, and the flow was perfectly free of unnecessary filler words.

Wonderfully penned, great read Jenn !!!!!

I love contradictions :-) and I liked your poem a lot. It had something that we all experience at least once.
Liked the rhyme a lot Jenn.
Well done sweetness!