Comments : I Only Have Eyes For You.

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Vivid images of why you would only have eyes for the one you love. Very well done.

  • 14 years ago

    by Countess of Monte Cristo

    What a romantic write. When we are captivated by someone, we simply are without any rationality.
    You used many images here, which I found particularly delightful.
    A 5 for me Temps.

  • 14 years ago

    by Daniel Rutter

    Very deep, very nice.
    4/5
    What I would give for something like this eh?

  • 14 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Beautiful is all I can say, I could imagine this passionate love burning even further with each word I read. Great job, keep it up!

    ~MaryAnne

    Merry Christmas!

  • 14 years ago

    by ilikepurple222

    This is absolutely beautiful!!!! keep writing!!!

  • 14 years ago

    by Lu

    Your honey coated personality
    ^^^
    Great opening line! Love the insertion of honey coated instead of the normal (sweet, warm ect)
    Gives the reader (a taste) of the person to which your poem is centered around.

    Your smooth hands prompting
    desires as you caressed my
    arms with a soothing touch
    of undying adoration.
    ^^
    Love is a feeling many writers struggle with to describe what exactly it feels like. But I think you have described it perfectly here. The sizzle it gives us when the one we love does something as simple as caress our arm.
    Now that to me is LOVE!

    Loved this read and love the title.
    I Only Have Eyes For You
    ^^^
    Something we all desire in our relationship.

    Beautiful read !

  • 14 years ago

    by Laurenf7

    5/5