This poem speaks to me!!! Great work on this. Putting into words what so many of us feel!!! Again great poem!!! 5/5!!!

Beautiful! I loved that the beggining was same as end, nicely summed it up! Keep writing, best way to deal with your personal problems i think:)

Thanks for sharing! 5/5

Well written!!!!!

This is really well worded and so easy to relate to. With love comes the possibility of heartache...but without love our lives would be empty and pointless. So take the rose and accept the thorns is my device:)

Chin up girl, I hope all willl work out well for you:)

Well done.

God bless,

5/5 Ingrid