Good morning my love.

by Holly   Dec 12, 2009


I'd like to give credits to Chelsey, who wrote "How did you sleep?". It was top rated. I really liked it so I wrote my own little version of it. Some parts are similiar or the same. But I thought I'd at least give her the credits she deserves :). It was an amazing poem. Hope you like mine as well.

Good morning my love, how did you sleep?
Not too good, you weren't next to me.
I screamed and ached the whole night through.
I hope you know I'm lost without you.

I was thinking of you and I couldn't rest.
Holding my pillow didn't compare to your chest.
Music wouldn't help; it's different from your heart beat.
I needed your warmth, and your feet on my feet.

Good afternoon my love, how was your day?
I saw you twice, so it was okay.
But you must know that I still missed you like crazy.
At times,I couldn't walk; man, was I lazy.

I couldn't focus, you were stuck on my mind.
Almost held back, cause I was behind.
I was so tired and couldn't stay awake.
Knowing it was my heart you were about to take.

Goodnight my love, what will you dream?
Without you here, I'll probably scream.
I'll keep my eyes open, won't shut my eyes.
Even though, beneath my eyelid, the future lies.

But eventually I will dream, of only your lips.
My heart will pound as the beat skips.
Then closer we came, in utter bliss.
And of course I wake up from this almost kiss.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Jacqueline Bautista

    I really liked this poem:)
    i think it relates to how i feel
    towards this guy...
    its really sweet:)
    n thnx for your comment:]
    could you please rate it?
    well..excellent work:)
    5/5 :)