by Courageous Dreamer Dec 12, 2009
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Life, society /
other
Distance will never change |
by Lady Nik
Grr I should have read this a long time ago, not sure why I didn't. I like the honesty in this piece. It reminded me of a love poem and I think that's the metaphor you used here. Anyways I like the relationship you describe with "hope" and how much it means to you. I think more people need to read this piece and hopefully they will take what I took from it. Reading this gave me a really positive feeling and it makes me want to keep trying. That's something even my closest friends weren't able to do. Something about the words you use and the imagery give my heart a warm feeling. Which has been rare for me lately. Anyways I think this was one of your best pieces. I know it came from the heart and I'm glad I read it. Thanks for sharing your talent with me. Nik |
I liked this. the title caught my eye as well and made me want to read it. it was simple, yet really nice to read. :) please read my poem "change"? |
The title and truth of it caught my eye right away and your words read strong in my view. Very inspiring and heartwarming thoughts you have created, the meaning here is a great reminder. Patience, don't all of us need more of it? |
by shlok
Patience is a sign of strength within you...which is well described in this poem...very nice deserves 5/5 |
by Meena Krish
How true! Patience is gold & strength does |