Patience Is Gold.

by Courageous Dreamer   Dec 12, 2009


Distance will never change
this love I have for you.
Nights spent without you
may seem lonely as
desires tease my mind
but with a bright future
staring me in the eyes-
patience is worth gold.

Waiting strengthens
everything between our
souls-bringing them closer
together with mutual love
and emotions deep within
our hearts; creating a more
flexible love to share forever.

Soon distance will dissipate,
nights will be spent together
in happiness and laughs,
desires will be granted
with hugs and kisses while
in eachother's embrace...

I live for this special moment
and I know...

I could never
go wrong with you standing
by my side.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Grr I should have read this a long time ago, not sure why I didn't. I like the honesty in this piece. It reminded me of a love poem and I think that's the metaphor you used here. Anyways I like the relationship you describe with "hope" and how much it means to you. I think more people need to read this piece and hopefully they will take what I took from it. Reading this gave me a really positive feeling and it makes me want to keep trying. That's something even my closest friends weren't able to do. Something about the words you use and the imagery give my heart a warm feeling. Which has been rare for me lately. Anyways I think this was one of your best pieces. I know it came from the heart and I'm glad I read it. Thanks for sharing your talent with me. Nik

  • 14 years ago

    by ilikepurple222

    I liked this. the title caught my eye as well and made me want to read it. it was simple, yet really nice to read. :) please read my poem "change"?

  • 14 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    The title and truth of it caught my eye right away and your words read strong in my view. Very inspiring and heartwarming thoughts you have created, the meaning here is a great reminder. Patience, don't all of us need more of it?

    Great write!

    ~MaryAnne

    Merry Christmas!

  • 14 years ago

    by shlok

    Patience is a sign of strength within you...which is well described in this poem...very nice deserves 5/5

    love shlok

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    How true! Patience is gold & strength does
    grow with it. It will test you each minute but
    at the same time fill you with a mountain of
    hope. Liked the read :)

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