This is so very refreshing. Could feel that young love in air. Very nicely written with such wise words 'patience is worth gold'

Awesome write

all the best and take care

Temps
This is such a beautiful piece you have penned. A love that is true can withstand time and distance.

Soon distance will dissipate,
nights will be spent together
in happiness and laughs,
desires will be granted
with hugs and kisses while
in eachother's embrace...

The say absence makes the heart grow fonder.....and when you do finally come together with your true love it will have been worth the wait.

I live for this special moment
and I know...

I could never
go wrong with you standing
by my side.

Lovely ending. To a beautiful poem.
Excellent job!
Love Cindy

Temps, this is no flattery, but your poems never bore me, and this is no exception.
How much do all of us long for the person you describe here. A person who saves us even from ourselves.
A 5 for me.

Patience is a virtue not many people have. True love can survive time and distance. Well done.

Aww, this is beautiful Temps, I loved it. Very endearing and written from the heart. And yes... its true, distance will never change true love.. Ever. Well written and expressed..:)

Such a beautifully woven piece Temps.

Shows the power of love with its patience and dedication .. how it can indeed conquer anything.

Beautiful beautiful heart warming write!

Soon distance will dissipate,
nights will be spent together
in happiness and laughs,
desires will be granted
with hugs and kisses while
in eachother's embrace...
^^^
Such a happy ending brings warmth to a reader's heart.

Little typo error (spacing) in the last line hun.

Excellent read !

How true! Patience is gold & strength does
grow with it. It will test you each minute but
at the same time fill you with a mountain of
hope. Liked the read :)

Patience is a sign of strength within you...which is well described in this poem...very nice deserves 5/5

love shlok

The title and truth of it caught my eye right away and your words read strong in my view. Very inspiring and heartwarming thoughts you have created, the meaning here is a great reminder. Patience, don't all of us need more of it?

Great write!

~MaryAnne

Merry Christmas!

I liked this. the title caught my eye as well and made me want to read it. it was simple, yet really nice to read. :) please read my poem "change"?

Grr I should have read this a long time ago, not sure why I didn't. I like the honesty in this piece. It reminded me of a love poem and I think that's the metaphor you used here. Anyways I like the relationship you describe with "hope" and how much it means to you. I think more people need to read this piece and hopefully they will take what I took from it. Reading this gave me a really positive feeling and it makes me want to keep trying. That's something even my closest friends weren't able to do. Something about the words you use and the imagery give my heart a warm feeling. Which has been rare for me lately. Anyways I think this was one of your best pieces. I know it came from the heart and I'm glad I read it. Thanks for sharing your talent with me. Nik