Paradise Awaits

What a lovely dedication, Cindy. Moving and powerful work.
All the very best
Ben

A touching tribute to your late husband, Lovely Cindy...

Rest assured, if he were here, he would be touched by your words. Paradise awaits you to join him. John would have been proud. A 5 for me, Lovely lady

A beautiful, touching tribute to your husband! I can feel the love you have for him, and what he meant to you! Very moving!

Take care,
Randy

5/5

I love all of your poetry.
he ones i read anyways.
:))
this poem in by far my favorite though.
I dont know why, it just is.
dont stop writing, you have some real potential.

And it would be greatly appriciated if you could comment and rate one of my poems.
thanks love!

-jesss.
Btw:: Im putting you in my favorites ;)

I love how beautiful this poem was crafted. It's just filled with full of sincere and your words paints a loving image full of serenity. How pure can romantic be, to depart from this earth and let your heart beat together with your love as one. I just love how you end the poem. No doubt this is like the best dedication that I've read so far and I'm sure he would be proud of you too for writing such a splendid poem. Excellent work