This almost brought a tear to my eye probably because of the dedication. Anyways, just absolutely beautiful you may have outdone yourself here...I think this is one of those poems that you love more the more you read it. I must say this poem is wonderful.

This is so beautiful. Best gift anyone could get. Could feel love and emotions spilling from every single word.

Really loved this opening stanza

Will you follow where I lead
If so come take my hand
Spend eternity with me
Walk across the desert sands

awesome write dear

all the best and take care

Sweet Cindy, this is a heartfelt write to John. I'm sure he can sense the beauty of these words as you wrote them.
The imagery of nature that you used, eventually witnessing the reunion of two hearts, added a nice and expected touch to the poem.

I'm utterly sure John would love this if he read it. A 5 for me dear lady.

Cindy, a wonderful love poem for John on his birthday, I'm sure he has heard every word of it. Well done.

Cindy, words fail me to express what a wonderful poem you have penned.. Lol. It's beautiful... and most touching. One day you will meet him lolol... and what a day that will be! Love & Hugs...Olwin.

Thoughts and prayers are with you on this day Cindy.

Such a beautiful dedication. I am sure he has heard every word that beats from your heart.

Touching read

Such a beautiful write yet its so sad. I can
feel the love you hold & the memories you
treasure...touching write :)

*applause* i love it

Beautifully worded write. i loved him so much. we'll see him again though. praise the Lord. 5/5

Beautifully worded write. i loved him so much. we'll see him again though. praise the Lord. 5/5

This was a beautiful and heartwarming dedication. The lines flowed together so perfectly and a smile right away came to my face as I read about your love, and your souls united.

Thank you for sharing this with us, what a beauty to read.

God bless you and Merry Christmas!

~MaryAnne

Cindy, what a beautiful dedication you penned here for John.The sadness in every word came from a just as beautiful heart.
I'm sure he knows what you feel deep inside for him and one day you will be able to express these words in person to him.
Take care my friend.
Paul...

I love how beautiful this poem was crafted. It's just filled with full of sincere and your words paints a loving image full of serenity. How pure can romantic be, to depart from this earth and let your heart beat together with your love as one. I just love how you end the poem. No doubt this is like the best dedication that I've read so far and I'm sure he would be proud of you too for writing such a splendid poem. Excellent work

I love all of your poetry.
he ones i read anyways.
:))
this poem in by far my favorite though.
I dont know why, it just is.
dont stop writing, you have some real potential.

And it would be greatly appriciated if you could comment and rate one of my poems.
thanks love!

-jesss.
Btw:: Im putting you in my favorites ;)

A beautiful, touching tribute to your husband! I can feel the love you have for him, and what he meant to you! Very moving!

Take care,
Randy

5/5

A touching tribute to your late husband, Lovely Cindy...

Rest assured, if he were here, he would be touched by your words. Paradise awaits you to join him. John would have been proud. A 5 for me, Lovely lady

What a lovely dedication, Cindy. Moving and powerful work.
All the very best
Ben