by Lu Dec 12, 2009
category :
Life, society /
other
Beginning of the End |
I just realized you wrote a bit on the bottom explaining about the club challenge and I see now. You were very unique in writing this and it did make me feel different the second time around, less hopeful, feeled with the sense of death. Good job! |
This was such an original poem and I liked your style that held the reader's attention. The power behind your words striked me and gave me a meaning to ponder over. Thanks for sharing. |
by Kuro
Hmm. this sounds like an interesting and fun way to write. i might try this sometime. thanks for the idea. and i see what you mean about the 2nd time you read. gives it different meaning and whatnot. nicely done |
by shlok
This is one of the master piece Luanne...it inspires my thought process...keep it up..good work..surelly deserves 5/5. |
Aww... beautiful! I love the meaning and loved the circular structure! Congrats on the win :) |