Comments : The Dream.

  • 14 years ago

    by FreeSpirit

    Very true, only if we could stay in our dreamlands. But your right realities stink at times when our eye lids slide open! I like this poem.

  • 14 years ago

    by AJ

    This is very beautiful, and there are so many people feel this way. i love your rhyming scheme, that is usually how I like to rhyme.

  • 14 years ago

    by AJ

    This is very beautiful, and there are so many people feel this way. i love your rhyming scheme, that is usually how I like to rhyme.