Your poems are always so sad, Adel and this is no exception. You can almost hear sorrow whimpering as you read the words you have written. Well done.

Its like sorrow has life & character. You can
feel as well as hear sorrow..a touching write.

'I am in this cancer
This cancer of grief'
^This really stood out to me--a unique way of describing grief, saying it's like cancer. This is definatly true.

A emotion filled write from you--very nicely done.