Comments : Whimper Of Sorrow

  • 15 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Your poems are always so sad, Adel and this is no exception. You can almost hear sorrow whimpering as you read the words you have written. Well done.

  • 15 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Its like sorrow has life & character. You can
    feel as well as hear sorrow..a touching write.

  • 15 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    'I am in this cancer
    This cancer of grief'
    ^This really stood out to me--a unique way of describing grief, saying it's like cancer. This is definatly true.

    A emotion filled write from you--very nicely done.