Im tired

by Jay Perry Jr   Dec 14, 2009


I'm tired of your attitude
until i cant even look at you
i try to say how i feel
but you don't take me for real

see i put my heart on the line
so I'm demanding your time
when I'm sharing how i feel
no time for games this is real

I'm tired of your disrespect
to all your back talk i abject
make me wanna kick your ass
but i ain't that kind of man

see you put your heart on the line
so I'm giving you my time
when your sharing how you feel
i take you serious i know your for real

since cursing you out don't do any good
it just make things worse than it is
sometimes i think to back hand slap you
but that ain't how i do

cause our hearts are on the line
so we need to give the time
when we're sharing how we feel
we need to keep it 100 for real

and I'm just tired
I'm so tired
until i cant even look at you
...its a shame

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  • 14 years ago

    by Daniel Rutter

    4/5.

    On your poem itself:
    I really like the short, to-the-point sentences. I particularly like the use of the word 'abject'... I've not seen that in a poem before. I felt the tiredness in the words, I felt the fed-up feeling... I felt the anger. One thing I would suggest, is improve your grammar. It makes things much easier to read if you set it out properly.

    On your feeling:
    Whatever you do, please don't take your anger out on this woman psychically. I've been there, and there is no guilt short of murder that overtakes what you feel afterward. The regret will swallow you up. If you ever get that feeling, just walk out the door and come back when you feel better.
    Good luck with this woman, I hope things work out.

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