I agree. This poem is abstract. Very much so. Although I like the theme, I must say that there many contradictions throughout the write. I dont think I want to sound too critical by pointing them out. I will say, I think it was a worthy try at profoundness.

I love this poem it makes me want to cry :( i know how you feel in this poem. my poem ''THESES TEARS'' are like ur poem here so message me if u wanna talk:)