This thought provoking piece made me think of zen meditation briefly. This demonstrated to me how blissfull it is to lose ones self

Wow I totally agree with the first comment, this poem actually made me question myself, brilliant job! Its quite difficult to make a reader engange themselves in your poetry =]
Brilliant job, Im extremly impressed!

REally enjoyed the write and the meaning here impacted.
I wish you had continued to used the "bullet" type statements throughout as they add emphasis and could get longer as they built to the conclusion.

Still making great poetry I see, 5/5.

Greetings from fellow site veteran, peace.

Love it. kind of sad, but a deep lesson.

Close your eyes.

Don't move.

Don't breathe.

A deep concentration is required upon doing these steps to cease to exist for a moment.

Great job. Keep up

Another great write... This poem too induces the reader to flow with the piece and realise the message u gave...

Good work:)
5/5 from me