If i stayed

by RiAnne   Dec 16, 2009


Looking back at the past
We had something and
We thought it would last
But our fate had other plans
And that included us being apart

Would something be changed if I stayed?
If I stayed would you have chose me
If I didn't go away will it stay like how it used to be?
Will everything be fine I'll be yours and you'll be mine

I know I'm the one who broke your heart
But it also hurts me to be apart
I never really told you how I felt
Until the day I left
I wanted to tell you but there's something that
stopping me to do so

Maybe we weren't really meant to be
I guess it just wasn't our destiny
The only thing to do now is to move on
This thing has been going on for too long

Even if I stayed you'd still choose her
Even if I stayed we would still have changed
And if I stayed I wouldn't be yours and you wouldn't be mine

What we had should just be kept in the past
We once had our chance
That was the end of our last dance

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  • 14 years ago

    by Sunshine

    This is my fav from those i hav read....many can feel same and ur opening stanza was so like revealing to the whole concept

    Looking back at the past
    We had something and
    We thought it would last
    But our fate had other plans
    And that included us being apart

    i mean how true this is..u knw no one knws what destiny hides for us

    5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by chind

    Really really liked this! it was even better because i could relate to some parts of it, and just everything you have said is true...maybe it just wasnt meant to be! But that only means there is someone even better out there

  • 14 years ago

    by Freedom

    Ye this thing happened to me :? i stayed and he has chosen her...

  • 14 years ago

    by Ed or Ian Henderson

    I really like this, even if the rhythm to it is a little erratic at times. It seems such a straightforward poem until the "Even if I stayed you'd still choose her" line. That gave it a much deeper emotional touch that frankly I wasn't expecting.

  • 14 years ago

    by Shamia

    It was like listening to a mended heart tell the story of how it was once broken...you told the story beautifully!!!!

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